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Every pub needs a vision statement
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While this is writing, it's not formal, it's a marketing ad directed less than savvy want to be entrepreneurs... It's meant to be sales speech.
Right, and a sales speech should be somewhat formal. It's not like an essay or legal appeal, but it should be a lot more formal than a discussion at a backyard BBQ or whatever.
I don't know. I think it gets the point that the writer is a marketing or sales idiot across quite clearly if the grammar is bad too.