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Mythians - taking suggestions (app.kanka.io)

submitted 1 month ago by Gradually_Adjusting@lemmy.world to c/worldbuilding@lemmy.world

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This is a playable race in a game I've been developing. I like the premise, but the overall impression feels lacking to me. Mythians come from elves in this story, which are more like cenobites than fairies (taking cues from Pratchett's Lords and Ladies but hyperbolically so, until you're more into Gwar territory). They've renounced horrific madness and cosmic power. It's got a lot going for it, but I'm not happy with how "simple" and just-so it all feels. Any help?

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[–] Gradually_Adjusting@lemmy.world 2 points 1 month ago

No worries, thanks for the advice. You've actually given me a great starting point for making these folk interesting to me again!