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submitted 2 days ago by SnokenKeekaGuard@lemmy.dbzer0.com to c/morewrite@awful.systems

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Would love any and all critique.

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[–] SnokenKeekaGuard@lemmy.dbzer0.com 4 points 2 days ago (1 children)

Thank you for writing this.

I did consider a lot of possibilities of where to go with this. But I decided to go tame and write this as if it were a company profile by a modern media company. I just thought of how the nyt would write about openAI.

I have sooooo many ideas and directions to go into with CRISPR technology that I might actually write more about it.

[–] jaschop@awful.systems 2 points 2 days ago

I'd be looking forward to it!