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[–] damnedfurry@lemmy.world 13 points 14 hours ago (2 children)

This is two panels too long, imo.

Change the first panel’s text to “Forgive me, Helen, I’ve changed!”, the second’s to “Have you, Theseus?”, and you’re done, lol.

[–] x00z@lemmy.world 4 points 12 hours ago

I needed the little punchline in panel 3 to remember it.

[–] Zozano@aussie.zone 3 points 14 hours ago (1 children)

Who stop there? Make it one panel with stacked speech bubbles.

[–] damnedfurry@lemmy.world 7 points 14 hours ago (1 children)

The punchline should be on its own panel to create a natural temporal gap between it and the setup, for the reader. :)

[–] idunnololz@lemmy.world 2 points 5 hours ago (1 children)

insert joke of Theseus here

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