Need Some Play Testers (drive.google.com)

submitted 6 months ago by psion1369@lemmy.world to c/rpgdesign@lemm.ee

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I've been writing a game based around super humans, and I need some people to help out with play testing my character creation. Here is a link to all the files in a Google Drive. Please read the README file and get the feedback form when you are done. Thank you all

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[-] DerisionConsulting@lemmy.ca 3 points 6 months ago

I am not filling out the form.

The first thing that hit me is that these pages are formatted in a way that is unpleasant to read; it feels it's a chore.

I would recommend making the pages 2 columns instead of 1. It's a quick change that really makes a difference without needing to change the wording. The effort to payoff ratio is on par with learning to drybrush or ink a miniature.

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