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[-] DrElementary@lemmy.world 33 points 6 months ago

Is anyone else bothered by the addition of the word "just", which throws off the whole rhythm and doesn't need to be there in any way?

[-] Etterra@lemmy.world 3 points 6 months ago

It works if you pronounce the last word as three syllables. I don't know if that's the correct way to pronounce it, but it is the American way to pronounce it.

[-] DrElementary@lemmy.world 6 points 6 months ago

"I'm a bitch"

3 syllables

"I'm an orca"

4 syllables

"Sinking yachts"

3 syllables

"Off Majorca"

4 syllables

Adding "Just" makes it 5, which is too many for the pattern

[-] samus12345@lemmy.world 2 points 6 months ago

Also, "Imma hit you with my tail" is one syllable too many. "I'll" would work better.

[-] Etterra@lemmy.world 1 points 6 months ago
[-] samus12345@lemmy.world 3 points 6 months ago

It's awkward, especially since the "just" is completely unnecessary.

[-] slackassassin@sh.itjust.works 2 points 6 months ago

Naw, the line should only be 4 syllables. "I'm a mother" is the og.

[-] bitwaba@lemmy.world 1 points 6 months ago

I'd imagine whoever wrote this doesn't know how to pronounce Majorca

[-] Assman@sh.itjust.works 1 points 6 months ago

I know how that's my favorite Zelda game

[-] bitwaba@lemmy.world 2 points 6 months ago

I smoked majorka's ass once.

GUD SHIT

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