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Anon tries to keep his hands busy (sh.itjust.works)
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[-] frightful_hobgoblin@lemmy.ml 62 points 5 months ago

Story didn't go anywhere

[-] fibojoly@sh.itjust.works 96 points 5 months ago

Well yeah, it's a slice of life, not the Hero's Journey.

[-] MadBob@feddit.nl 63 points 5 months ago

This motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn't revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue...

[-] manuallybreathing@lemmy.ml 4 points 5 months ago

Its totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU

[-] steal_your_face@lemmy.ml 1 points 5 months ago

Long John silvers gold?

[-] Kusimulkku@lemm.ee 1 points 5 months ago

Could've made it more interesting though

[-] LemmyKnowsBest@lemmy.world 2 points 5 months ago

Yeah could've added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.

[-] Kusimulkku@lemm.ee 2 points 5 months ago

Idk about adding, I would've just changed what is already there to be more interesting

[-] Instigate@aussie.zone 35 points 5 months ago

One of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.

[-] festnt@sh.itjust.works 19 points 5 months ago

yeah, stories dont walk, duh

this post was submitted on 08 Jun 2024
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