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Made my first short film (www.youtube.com)
submitted 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago) by lookluc@lemmy.world to c/imadethis@lemm.ee
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[-] livus@kbin.social 2 points 7 months ago

@lookluc cool, I just crossposted it to kbin movies!

[-] lookluc@lemmy.world 1 points 7 months ago

Thank you so much!

[-] Jake_Farm@sopuli.xyz 1 points 7 months ago

Comments are disabled?

[-] lookluc@lemmy.world 1 points 7 months ago

Yes

[-] maniacalmanicmania@aussie.zone 1 points 7 months ago

Who is the narrator?

[-] livus@kbin.social 1 points 7 months ago

I might be halucinating but it sounds like a new zealander.

[-] maniacalmanicmania@aussie.zone 1 points 7 months ago

I missed this because I wasn't looking. Maxwell Gisborne.

[-] lookluc@lemmy.world 1 points 7 months ago

Correct!

[-] JoMiran@lemmy.ml 1 points 7 months ago

I'd skip the text overlays as they "meme-ify" the film. Also, I replaced the audio with REM's Everybody Hurts and it fit the vibe quite nicely.

[-] lookluc@lemmy.world 2 points 7 months ago

I don't understand "meme-ify" but ok. I tried listening with that song and damn, you're right, it does!

[-] JoMiran@lemmy.ml 1 points 7 months ago

I mean that the typeface you used is commonly used in memes. It just seems like it would have looked nicer with the title in a single title card screen rather than have pieces of it flashing and jumping around in the first few clips. It seems hyper, erratic, funny (again, in a meme way), and at odds with the vibe of the rest of the film.

[-] lookluc@lemmy.world 1 points 7 months ago

Thank you for de feedback!

this post was submitted on 01 May 2024
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