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Anon tries to keep his hands busy
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this post was submitted on 08 Jun 2024
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Story didn't go anywhere
Well yeah, it's a slice of life, not the Hero's Journey.
This motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn't revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue...
Its totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU
Long John silvers gold?
Could've made it more interesting though
Yeah could've added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.
Idk about adding, I would've just changed what is already there to be more interesting