Part of the reason this headline is a grammatical dumpster fire is that they tried to cram every possible prurient detail into the headline itself, relevance be damned.
Like, how very fascinating that the fact that the victim was a cheerleader rated space right up in the headline. If they wanted to cram in biographical details, aspiring nurse was right there, but they didn't go for that, and we all know why.
For-profit news is garbage
OP, I know it's not your fault (probably) but that title makes it seem like the killer was found dead. If you had reformatted like: "Man arrested in connection with slain cheerleader foud dead in her mother's bathtub" it could have been made a little more clear. It isn't actually important to the story that the cheerleader was found in the bathtub and the title would have been much easier to understand without that bit of trivial information.
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Yeah I had to pause reading the headline too but didn’t want to editorialize it.
Fucking weird that the murderer ended up dead in the mom’s bathtub. I wonder if mom killed him?
/j
I know you're joking but the inclusion of the genderd pronoun does make it more clear about who was found in the tub.
So wait did the killer get killerred?
No, title is bad. Alleged killer arrested, accused of killing girl (who was found dead in a bathtub.)
Read the article?
Frankly, if this is the title, the article can't be worth the time.
This is a very stupid thing to say.
Why? If you can't write a title, what makes you think you can write an entire article?
I concur!
Slayyy
Not the time.
When else could I possibly make this joke? It's the inappropriateness that's the point!
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